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Wednesday, April 2, 2014

Blueberry Donut

In my poem Temptation I used my senses to write.  I write stories and have a hard time with details. It helps me to practice writing this way. Like right now I am eating a sugar glazed blueberry donut. Something as simple as that, I made into a poem. Tell me what you think.


Blueberry Donut

My mouth waters
at the blueberry smell.
 
A delight to behold,
the round cake
with a hole.
 
The sugary glaze
lingers on my tongue.
Sticky and delicious
I can't get enough.
 
Mummers
 of appreciation
escape between bites,
until there is no more. 
 
Crumbs,
 the only evidence.


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